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Until the harsh light of day dissipates
I am forever trapped in this sullen bed
Forever to be a creature I hate

The night time hours I have come to dread
I wish so badly to be human again
Instead of the never changing undead

I've never experienced so much pain
The agony of watching loved ones die
I am a slave to this accursed bane

The life I have is treacherous and wry
I would not wish it upon anyone
Although some do pine for eternal life

Even for those expecting death to come
I refuse to grant them eternity
For lifelong death is more painful than one

The thoughts in my mind are my enemies
I try to restrain my awful hunger
should I slip into wicked tendency

The lonely centuries that I have endured
Have made me loath love and scorn the daylight
I dwell in a world where bliss is torture

Forever trapped in elongated night
Like the pine wood coffin made for the dead
Where I return before vexing twilight

To the dejected tomb of the bereaved
Mordant existence I cannot transcend
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:iconmakola94:
I have no idea why, but I pictured this totally gruesome creature when I read this. This monster kind of despises himself and then he has these vampirish attributes.

I like this because it's a good insight even though I have little to relate to this, it makes me want to. And that's very good for a poem to do so.


Keep it up :thumbsup:

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I write and take pictures.
yea, i'm planning immortality.
perhaps it'll happen.
:iconloverofroses:
its supposed to be a vampire who hates what he is :D
thanks :D

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Albrecht: Police! Don't move! I said "Don't move!"
Eric: I thought the police always said "Freeze!"
Albrecht: Well I am the police and I say"Don't move" Snow White. You move,you're dead.
Eric: And I say "I'm dead"and I move.
:pumpkin: HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
:iconmakola94:
hahaha. i could have written that one line too, but I dont like to sum up a whole poem in one line :blush:

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I write and take pictures.
yea, i'm planning immortality.
perhaps it'll happen.
:iconloverofroses:
lol :D

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Albrecht: Police! Don't move! I said "Don't move!"
Eric: I thought the police always said "Freeze!"
Albrecht: Well I am the police and I say"Don't move" Snow White. You move,you're dead.
Eric: And I say "I'm dead"and I move.
:pumpkin: HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
:iconjesusroxgirl:
this is beautifully written :) i love how you kept the rhyme scheme up and it is very unique! love it! :+fav:

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Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your path's straight. ~Proverbs 3:5-6
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thanks so much for the comments and fave :P

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Albrecht: Police! Don't move! I said "Don't move!"
Eric: I thought the police always said "Freeze!"
Albrecht: Well I am the police and I say"Don't move" Snow White. You move,you're dead.
Eric: And I say "I'm dead"and I move.
:pumpkin: HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
:iconjesusroxgirl:
not a problem :)

--
Trust in the Lord with all your heart and lean not on your own understanding. In all your ways acknowledge him, and he will make your path's straight. ~Proverbs 3:5-6
*Clubs* ~MartialArtsClub777 | =Jesus-loves-You | ~dAWriterStrike
:iconloverofroses:
:)

--
Albrecht: Police! Don't move! I said "Don't move!"
Eric: I thought the police always said "Freeze!"
Albrecht: Well I am the police and I say"Don't move" Snow White. You move,you're dead.
Eric: And I say "I'm dead"and I move.
:pumpkin: HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

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